Hi Briea, wow! You have included many descriptive ideas in your writing about Miss Reissmann. I especially like how you have included information about her personality. Next time you could add an anecdote to go with each of your personality adjectives such as Miss Reissmann is cheerful. She always says "Good morning!" to each of us in a happy tone as we arrive at school each day. Keep up the great work, Mrs P.
Hi Briea, wow! You have included many descriptive ideas in your writing about Miss Reissmann. I especially like how you have included information about her personality. Next time you could add an anecdote to go with each of your personality adjectives such as Miss Reissmann is cheerful. She always says "Good morning!" to each of us in a happy tone as we arrive at school each day. Keep up the great work, Mrs P.
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