Tuesday 17 March 2020

Limerick

6 comments:

  1. Hi Briea, I am Dwyane from Glenbrae School. Your peom is nice. YOu used good words for rhymes. Amazing job

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    1. Kia Dwyane
      Thanks for commenting on my blog post

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  2. Kia Ora Briea this is Arli from Grey Main school I really like your limerick poem you made it rhyme well you put detailed cool photos in and it was funny.
    whats your favourite cats or rats ?.

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  3. Hi Briea

    How are you doing during this Level 4 lockdown? I hope there are some fun things happening at your house!
    This is a great piece of poetry writing that you have posted. You have rhymed it really well! The kitten is so cute!

    Remember to go and check out the Totara site for some of the fun things that you can do while you are at home!
    I look forward to reading some of your work over the next few weeks. Please post photos of anything that you do too so that we can all see what you have been up to!

    Talk again soon

    Mrs Costello :)

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  4. Kia ora Briea, Kei te pehea koe?
    How are you and your beautiful family?
    I love your illustration of your limerick. Its really cute. Did you use an app to do it? That would have taken me all day to create.
    Its great checking in on everyone's blogs again. I miss all the crazy characters from Totara 4 and I wish that T1 could come and hang out with me in The Studio some time.
    Keep up the good work.
    See ya,
    Mrs Gully

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  5. Kia ora Briea
    It is Pyper.
    Awesome limerick, I like how it is funny and different to other peoples. I also like the little picture in the coroner that cat is so cute.
    Do you have a cat?
    Maybe next time you could add a description so that the readers know what a
    limerick is.
    See you next time,
    Pyper

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