Thursday 28 November 2019

The Widow

               The widow  
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It was a dark foggy night outside stood a widow her lips were blue her skin was white she was dressed in a long black dress she looked as if she was dead. Then a crow flew past then came back and landed on the widow fell down to the ground after the widow just layed there in silence and never moved then a cat came and ate the bird but by the widow was gone nowhere to be seen again.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Briea
    This is a great piece of writing. I like the way you have used a sensible font. Next time you could make the writing on one page so it is easier to read.
    Blog you later
    Molly

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.